EVery time I read over it, I keep feeling like I'm trying too hard. I know that the writing itself is okay, but I'm not very good at just saying what I want to say and moving on with the story. I love the Peninsula so much, I keep trying to put in little tidbits of info, and it just makes it seem crammed. I should probably try to actually get through the story first, and then I can fill it in in places where it seems bare. I hate doing that, but it seems like it's the only way I'm going to get it done.
Or maybe I'll write something else completely. Da Vinci Code Part Deux?! Peut-etre non.
Who writes novels anyway. (<---)
I'm gonna play WoW now.










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Oh, if only I were witty.
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Oh, if only I were witty.
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δThe Psycho Ferretδ
~...A soldier who is completely sure is sublimely beautiful.~
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you taste like strawberry
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tray i
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tray i
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you taste like strawberry
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Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabis, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam -
"I have a catapult. Give me all your money, or I will fling an enormous rock at your head"
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Oh, if only I were witty.
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